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Wednesday, November 19

so near..yet so far..

he is so near..yet so far..
i can hear his laughter surrounding me...
each time i turn around..his melodious voice attracting me...
they only converse...
Loretta:ouch!!
Bilford:sorry..
.
OR
Loretta:can you please pick that up for me?
Bilford:..{picked up}
something similar to this and that...
it doesn't even sound like a conversation...
it is to Loretta..every word has its own value...
it all started that very day....
BANG!!!...
Loretta looked up to that broad shoulder she had just knocked into....
slowly she forced her eyesight towards HIM...
Bilford:hei..i am sorry..did i hurt you?
Loretta:err...{stunned} n..o...n.o..t at all...did i hurt you?
"Shoot!!Loretta...nice question!!Now he is going to think that you are A Freak.."
Bilford: nope not all... urmm...
"awkward much Bilford..."
Bilford:anyway i got to go..see you(in a softer tone)( i guess)...
Loretta:....oh!! yea okay...
looking at 'him' surrounding by more and more girls as he walks through the hallway...
Loretta sighed.She managed to make herself look like a fool at the first day of school after summer.
June called up to me.We chatted about our summer holidays and it went on fore..v..e..r..but..
all Loretta could think of was the 'guy' that bang her just now..or maybe the guy that she knocked into..
"Who was that guy?"This question just can't stop lingering in her mind.
June:Loretta...Loretta... LORETTA!!..
Loretta: huh?..oh ya..ya.. and you were saying?
June: Loretta..can't you just focus on me first...i hate you!!
Loretta:yup!!..i know you hate me...haha..nice try June...
"i known June like FOREVER,that 'i hate you' thing is just an old code where June will say when she is angry at me,we never had a serious fight like EVER"
June:Get UP from your summer holidays,Loretta..it's over
Loretta:nope!..it ends once the bell rings.
RIIINNNGGG.........
"Here goes the bell..and here goes my summer holidays,me and my big mouth"
slowly..i dragged myself..actually June dragged me from our lockers to our first lesson.."Physics,great way to start school"
Others came along.Everyone started rushing towards the room..and June rushes me too not wanting me too be left out.
As usual..the guys paid their full attention to June.
'hi June!..HEI June!...Welcome back June!...'
'hi to you too..thanks..th...an...ks...!!'
"THIS is June..the famous girl which every girl want to be with,which every guy want to date with..it's just a shock that June still haven't abandoned me..she wouldn't dARE..June has been getting these kind of attention since kindergarten..June has always been the sweet,innocent,pretty girl with the 'soft girlish voice',I am the only individual which thinks she talked loudly..hmm.i wonder why?"

June:Loretta!Stop daydreaming!..here i found us seats...
Loretta:how lucky..
sigh..*looking around*
and...
"that's the guy!!that's the 'GUY'"..
Miss Oreo: Good morning,students.
Students:Good morning,Miss Oreo.
Miss Oreo:I guess you all had fun during your summer holidays.It's over now,time to pass your grades again.Anyway i have a new student here,just transfer from Lorain highschool.Boy,why don't you introduce yourself?

Bilford:Hi! My name is Bilford Milarge.Just call me Bilford.*smiles*
*whispers* ' he is cute..he is h..o..t..where will he be sitting?..ssshhhhssshhh'
Miss Oreo:Alright now, Master Bilford,go take your seat.
As Bilford walked by our seats to find a seat...
June:Hi, Bilford.Come sit with us.
"goodness how could June just did that!"
Biford: Hi,Junny.
Loretta: Junny? *stared at June
June: Here,take a seat right beside Loretta.
"June totally just ignore my stare"
Bilford:Oh!Hi! It's you...
"Great!'he' remembers me"
Loretta:..stammered..h..i...and it's you..
June is giving the same stare to me right now.
"oh my god!..Bilford is June's cousin..June didn't tell me that she had a such a fine cousin before.." June explained everything to Loretta.Seems that Bilford has just recently move into town due to his parents being transfered to work here..
"Toledo:a nice,decent place to live a.k.a my hometown"
And it all started from here...


P.S:

  • my story is basically based on individual imagination,any similar names,place or event are pure coincidences..
  • and i know its kinda lame haha..just had a rush of adrenaline to write it just now..

4 speak up:

sonu_hush said...

dats ur story? k i'll read it and tell u wut i think!! mwahahah!! heyy jie jie, do u know hw to change the word "comments" at the bottem of each post to "speak up"? LOLX!! i dunno hw to do it.. SOBX!! BTW ~ u better not get me jealous!! the green monster kills....>.>!!!

sonu_hush said...

"woa jie jie... sweet imagination.. for one minute there..i thought u sounded like me.. wow.. STOP IMITATING me!!! Its how I sound.. so get your own style sissy!! XD XD!!! nice starting thought.. i look forward for the REST!! weeee :P"

sonu_hush said...

"jie jie!! sobxx.. i wanna cry!! where did u get the piano sheets? and edward's lullaby? its soo freakin awesome!!! *tears*.. if ever i was granted a wish.. i would wish for Edward!! Sobx!!! i wanna cry!!! its so... emotional!!! SOBXXX!!!!!!! i am gonna get it from you ok? thanx jie jie!!!...."

Chinchin_92 said...

Erm...
The story is quite blur in the beginning. You started from nowhere and then suddenly BAM! you're in school after the summer holidays.
I hope you'll reread it to check for grammatical errors.
Other than that... It's quite okay.